Thursday, 5 March 2009. By the end of this lesson we hope to have achieved a finished opening seqences, edited, with a soundtrack and hopefully if achieved with a narration. The narration will hopefully explain the story line and will be achieved by Jordon doing a voice over. Monday, 2 March 2009. Thursday, 26 February 2009. Giving us some extra time to work! .

Friday, 7 November 2008. People in our class thought we had creative titles and they all agreed that we had good stills between the filming which created suspense. We also had a few mention our use of lighting and mise-on-scene. We had a mix of improvements that consisted of the soundtrack being repetitive and needing more of an edge, an unclear storyline and the acting needs to be better. Friday, 24 October 2008.

Friday, 7 November 2008. Constructive criticism from other groups. We had good use of effects, we had good camera work, good use of props for mise-en-scene. It had a CCTV effect on one scene. To improve we could slow the pace down as it was too fast. We should adjust the sound track. One group thought that the opening was too long. Friday, 24 October 2008. Friday, 17 October 2008. Friday, 3 October 2008.

Friday, 7 November 2008. Good use of props and camera angles. Better use of props and locations. Wednesday, 5 November 2008. The crime at the core of our narrative is Stalking which leads to murder. We did a close shot of the knife which is used in the murder, this becomes a clue later on. There are a lot of enigmas that need to be resolved, such as who are the two characters.

Monday, 15 September 2008.

Friday, 7 November 2008. Wednesday, 22 October 2008. This is the rough cut of our Thriller opening sequence. Tuesday, 21 October 2008. Wednesday, 15 October 2008.

Friday, 7 November 2008. We are pleased with the feedback that we got from the rest of the class. The majority of the class found the subtitles very effective and relative to the theme, the medical props used made it clear what the theme of the thriller was. The music was appropriate and fitted well with the genre. The thriller used a variety of shots. Bacteria and heart monitor shot where very effective. This feedback will be very useful for our individuals evaluations.

Wednesday, 22 October 2008. Every lesson we drew closer to madness,! Pia pia has to do it! Each lesson we started to sway, yeah yeah yeah yeah yheaaadgfuwhfwaeugkhwekjsfhekjghewflja,. And now we have lost our minds and we really want a chinese naomi is almost dying over the thought with her crazy eyes, ,. Its almost half 6 now and we are still at colege , now madness has taken over his miiinddd hes going craz. Ps need a wee wee and food.

Sunday, 9 November 2008. Friday, 7 November 2008. Feedback to Thriller final cut. Great use of camera angles, music and devices in general. Good prop use and costume. Pauses before subtitles were good.

Friday, 7 November 2008. Hoody give a good sense of mystery. Lighting effecting for building mystery. Good use of edited montage near end.